01-23-2010, 02:02 AM
I like the premise, truly depraved and creepy! I would however, be less straightforward with the details, not "weasel around the words" or anything, just describe things more subtley before the dude does stuff (Tell the audience more of his motivation, his thoughts on the matters and all!)
âThe Fright Night remake is a film which taps into the audienceâs deepest rooted fears, such as those of vampires throwing motorcycles at them. I dread the thought of a vampire throwing a refrigerator or a deskjet printer or... Iâd better stop before I give myself nightmaresâ
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