I need feedback!!!!!

[SamWinchester89]

Send me the link, also their is a movie coming out called that.

Actually it's here in the forum...I'll send u the link anyways...in the text sections. I didn't know about a movie coming out with that same title...anyway, before you read there's an explanation as to what it is...it's more of an extract from whatever it is that i'm writing(I don't even know myselF)...but it's the most horror scene so far...hope u enjoy it

http://www.talkhorror.com/showthread.php?t=2213