Raymond Did It Teaser Trailer (NSFW)
06-25-2010, 08:26 PM
From what I've seen, you've got some good mixed in with bad so far
Pros:
The direction seems quite solid thus far! Framing of Bryce's head was good, and the torture-esque scene also looked quite effective (not a fan of shaky-cam like when you showed the victim's torso, but keep it under control and it should be just fine; the other shots seem cool)
Some of the acting sounds good. The torture victim's screams were good and the voice at the end had a pretty creepy inflection
Cons:
Some of the acting sounds bad; the girl who came up with the plan to frame Raymond did not sound all that genuine
Just a gripe but I think the "coming soon" should be stable. The "Raymond Did It" logo itself is nice; the "coming soon" is a bit much of a contrast, if you understand what I'm saying.
Pros:
The direction seems quite solid thus far! Framing of Bryce's head was good, and the torture-esque scene also looked quite effective (not a fan of shaky-cam like when you showed the victim's torso, but keep it under control and it should be just fine; the other shots seem cool)
Some of the acting sounds good. The torture victim's screams were good and the voice at the end had a pretty creepy inflection
Cons:
Some of the acting sounds bad; the girl who came up with the plan to frame Raymond did not sound all that genuine
Just a gripe but I think the "coming soon" should be stable. The "Raymond Did It" logo itself is nice; the "coming soon" is a bit much of a contrast, if you understand what I'm saying.
âThe Fright Night remake is a film which taps into the audienceâs deepest rooted fears, such as those of vampires throwing motorcycles at them. I dread the thought of a vampire throwing a refrigerator or a deskjet printer or... Iâd better stop before I give myself nightmaresâ
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