Teaser of my fan-script
01-09-2011, 06:53 PM
Not to discount the location and all but you could use exterior cues to keep from repeating the place too often.
This is not only for you - the writer but also the reader's sanity...
Example:Instead of saying the deep south ..uses locations as to direct the action.
Since it take place in Texas you want to say something like -
the middle of nowhere, Texas
(close up to sign on wall letting watcher know - make up a name for the hospital - maybe even a nod to yourself here?)Mr Briggs insitute for the mental and crimiminally insane
It was a joy to read and good thing I'm not a fish - as I am already HOOKED
THANKS FOR SHARING :eg:
This is not only for you - the writer but also the reader's sanity...
Example:Instead of saying the deep south ..uses locations as to direct the action.
Since it take place in Texas you want to say something like -
the middle of nowhere, Texas
(close up to sign on wall letting watcher know - make up a name for the hospital - maybe even a nod to yourself here?)Mr Briggs insitute for the mental and crimiminally insane
It was a joy to read and good thing I'm not a fish - as I am already HOOKED
THANKS FOR SHARING :eg:
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