10-05-2009, 11:40 PM
[COLOR="Cyan"]I liked it. The segments were well done. The writing and editing were good.
My only suggestion, mainly due to long story that involves high school, put liquid in the bottles. That way you are really swallowing.
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My only suggestion, mainly due to long story that involves high school, put liquid in the bottles. That way you are really swallowing.
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